Freshman-0809
New Member
ok, I just uploaded my techinal first story on the sims 2 exchange online. if anyone could read it and give me some constructive criticism?<br />
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http//thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_de...<br />
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heres the link.<br />
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http//thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=235397<br />
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ok that should work.<br />
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http//thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_de...<br />
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heres the link.<br />
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http//thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=235397<br />
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ok that should work.<br />