Any feedback on my poem????

[Guest]

I?ve waited so long<br />
For my prince to come<br />
A boy to care for<br />
Someone to hug, kiss, and love<br />
A devotion strong enough<br />
For ours souls to entwine<br />
And when we depart<br />
We will look down<br />
As we reminisce <br />
About that magical day<br />
We first met<br />
I was lost in your eyes of blue<br />
You couldn?t help but smile<br />
After our lips first made contact<br />
And our bodies locked <br />
In a sweet embrace<br />
We knew it was love<br />
And like two turtle doves<br />
We will never drift apart<br />
<br />
Any help is appreciated ^_^<br />
I do like guys though ^_^<br />

 

[Roger]

wow, thats the gayest poem i almost read

 

[KatT]

Oh my gosh I love it so much. You are soo talented. Wow. Never stop writing. You have a real gift.

You are definately getting a star from me.

 

[BrookieL]

cool =)